Prologue to my Story
Hey guys!!! I'm new here!!!! My friend(I'm sure you alll know her) XxEmo_PaganxX helped me get a profile here so I'm pretty excited!! This is the prologue to my story. I kinda need some help. Maybe if you guys could give me some tips and suggestions, I would really appretiate it!!!
Amillia and her sister Elizabeth were twins they were just alike in every way there was, but they were also orphans that no one really cared about. Amillia was abused at home when she was thirteen years old by her father (who she trusted) her mother never helped her. When Elizabeth was born the abuse got worse, ten years later when Elizabeth was old enough their father started to rape and abuse her. Amillia could tell that their mother wanted the abuse to stop.
One day Elizabeth came running to Amillia crying
“Elizabeth why are you crying?” Amillia asked
“Daddy….kept….touching…me” Elizabeth cried Amillia finally had enough of the abuse and molestation. She went up the stairs and started yelling at him
“How dare you rape Elizabeth, she’s only ten years old”
“She needs to grow up and become a woman” he said to Amillia she couldn’t control her anger anymore. She ran at him without a second thought about the consequences of her actions. With a knife she tried to stab him, but that didn’t work desperately trying to get out of this situation she thrusted her leg up without aiming and kicked him in the shin Elizabeth walked in right before their father threw Amillia off of him Elizabeth screamed
“Don’t hurt Amy you dirty old man” Elizabeth jumped and started to hurt him Amillia got up and helped her little sister. When their mom walked in there was a brief moment when they thought that their mom was going to scream then call the cops
“We’re free!” she exclaimed “Pack your things we’re leaving this place and never coming back”
“Yay Elizabeth said as she ran up to her room to pack then she went with her to get her things too. Their mom ended up burning the house with him still inside of it though he wasn’t alive the smell made them gag. It was around Christmas time and they were on their way back from their grand parents house there was a truck stop and their mother had to stop for some snacks. When Sherrie walked outside to get into the car the back door was opened and Elizabeth was out of the car. Their mother looked under the car only to find a bomb there Amillia was stuck in the car Sherrie tried to get her out, but it was already too late the car exploded and the only thing that was there was a little girl that had her mother’s remains on her. They were sent to an Orphanage called Saint Anthony’s Amillia was adopted, but Elizabeth was not